Shadows Apon the Floor

Music within the air memories to
heal the bitter soul.
The sounds of the past come to life
in rock n roll.

The lights from the stage.
Cast ghost's of many.
Taking us all past the pressent.
To a perfect timeless age.

Nights of passion that exist evermore.
Casting the sprits magic.
dancing with the ghost's light's 
casting shadows apon the floor.

Secrets of lovers and new best friends.
We kiss blindley taseting the magic.
For that moment all is real no 
one pretends.

As the night flows like a curtain apon 
a gentle southern breeze.
From the floor to the legend 
this night does ease.

We write are own chapters all
ading in lifes book.
Regrets should be few.
For out of this night as much as we gave 
we also took.

Hearts entangled memories forever
do we adore.
Dancing with ghosts of lovers past.
Keeping time with the shadows apon
the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/1/2010 5:20:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading ...Marty
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Date: 1/14/2010 7:45:00 PM
This poem rocks, John! I enjoyed the images of lovers and friends dancing as their shadows are cast upon the floor. Nice work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/8/2010 3:00:00 AM
I really enjoyed this piece. Rhyme is my favorite type of poetry because it really pushes ones imagination to create a well written poem such as this one. Nice
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:55:00 AM
Warm and delightful write, John! Great imagery and flow! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/7/2010 12:12:00 AM
Some great imagery here John especially the inner poem of the last verse.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:28:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful write...here are some (tiny) errors line 7 present, line 10 spirits "We write are own chapters" / We write our own,"We kiss blindley taseting" / We kiss blindly tasting. "ading in/adding in. "shadows apon/upon..polish up this GEM! Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:01:00 AM
I love your rhyme John. Smile I guess all we Johns like rhymes.Lol. Sincerely, Moses
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