Shadows and Lines

My dear friend and worst foe, 
you follow me wherever I go,
towering above me sometimes, 
falling behind at other times.

On sunny days, my braids I admired, for hours on end,
as you showed them swing,  over the day growing longer.
On stormy nights, while we kids retired, our fingers did bend,
as the walls made eerie faces, our curiosity  growing stronger.

To my eyes, your unrelenting adherence, 
oft seems like a reverence,
although like an enemy, 
you sometimes stalk and waylay me.

Yet, it’s on you I rely, 
when luck fails to be my ally,
my guard down the lanes of treachery, 
partaking my grief and misery.

Now my brush splurges in deep hue, 
and kisses the canvas,
my dark shadow comes in view, 
and makes me nervous.

I mix vigor and passion, 
with sweeps of brilliant lines,
the picture tells my notion, 
that good and bad intertwines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Sharon. Love, Carol
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June 26, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Good result here Sharon, in the contest of Rick..
Devonshire Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Compelling poem, Sharon. Very interesting how you see the shadow as your enemy. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Nice approach here Sharon.Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 10:44 PM
It's fun to talk about one's shadow . YOu chose the more interesting of the two "lines and shadows" congrats on your HM. I really enoyed reading this one.
Well Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:51 AM
thank you so much, Andrea!
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June 22, 2011 at 6:35 PM
Hey Sharon, this is awesome. The last line really 'echoes'. Liked the imagery, your line of thinking, the internal ryhme scheme...pretty much everything. Must read more of you! Congrats! Cyndi
Well Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:51 AM
thank you very much, Cyndi!
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June 22, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Congrats Sharon on your HM in shadows and lines contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy a special honor for excellent poetry ..oh..
Well Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:52 AM
So nice to hear that. thanks, Linda!
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