Shadows

Deafening silence,
Roaring whispers,
Just within earshot.
Telling stories,
Asking questions,
About what is and is not.
Frantically jumping, 
Back and forth,
Looking for answers.
Feeling surrounded,
Feeling scared,
Stuck in a circle of shadows.
Darkness sunk,
Within the cracks,
No sign of hope.
Needing to break,
Wanting to scream,
Find some way to cope.
Aspirations, 
Exceeding the limit,
The cracks spread farther apart,
And all is lost,
In the shadows of the unknown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Can feel the anxiety through your words.
Brown Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Melanie. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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