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‘When you are not fed love on a silver spoon, you learn to lick it off knives.’ - Lauren Eden ----------------------------------------------- Ed had all his father's traits blue-green soft eyes, reed physique reckless, tempestuous streak rich baritone, proud untaught to love and be loved After 12 Christmas dinners whole dining table went cold alone, he had to go rogue young, kinless, awkward learnt to hate and be hated

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Date: 4/1/2025 5:41:00 PM
Dear Triveni, This is a wonderful piece in Suzette Prime. This format is challenging, but you have done it brilliantly!
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Date: 4/1/2025 8:43:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. Thank you very much, means so much to me. It is challenging, I agree.
Date: 3/31/2025 10:34:00 PM
Oh you did this very well hope to see it with a win
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Date: 4/1/2025 8:11:00 AM
fingers crossed! dear friend.

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