Shadows

Shadows

I am the ghost in the room
Seeing, not seen
Listening, not heard
I can feel my breath
hear the heart in my chest
Living invisibly

A shadow nothing more
Stitch myself to you
Ignored
Out of rhythm,out of synch
Your light so dim 
I disappear

I reflect a different Light
One that fits just right
I cast my very own
Shadow
I am myself.
With your light
I see the shape of you
In me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Dear Crystol, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of feeling unseen and unheard, yet also finding empowerment in your own existence. I loved the imagery of being the ghost in the room, living invisibly, and stitching yourself to others. Your words convey a sense of longing to be recognized and understood, while also embracing the uniqueness of your own light. The idea of casting your own shadow and seeing the shape of others within yourself is profound and thought-provoking. This is a very introspective piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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April 12, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Wow. You got it man! Thank you for seeing me and hearing me. Sincerely
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