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Shadows

Shadows

Silhouettes, shades of night
Obscure the hope, the heart, the right
Murky doubts, floating silent
Quiet as a mouse, abiding discreetly
Spiritually tumbling into the melancholic
Flames of a burning, breathless
Mourning, grief unburied, dreary
Dreading the moment… 
	Shoveling darkness over a casket

Dusk falls carefully, blackening
Edges of gloom – 
	Feelings, desolation growing
Grieving for the yearning,
Pouring out the autumn tears
Breaking through the light, insights
Whispers of dusk crying out in shapes
Outlines of death, skeletal ashes
	Passing into the presence
Past weeping, wailing, howling for hope
Wiping away the tears, burying 
Fear with the crisp, cool mornings
Edged with auburn and scarlet, embers
Alive, awakening brisk feelings, o’er and o’er
Painting the chestnut somber, urgency
Dejection in the sculpting…
	Shadows arranged on the earth
Birthing a feeling, a passion
	Contouring the loss, the fatality
Blending embraces, naked kisses
With the miracle of healing that arises
From faith, despite the dark, telling signs
Emerging from the twilight, evening glows
In the breathless blaze, sparks
Stars and moon creating their reflections
	Amid the nocturnal pleasures
Erasing all the despondency of night
So everything in life feels better, feels right
As the shadows fade into dawn’s delicious light







Beauty Of Night Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 
Entered Contest: November 13, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bose Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 5:11 AM
A beautiful write brimming with vivid imagery ... well deserved success with this, Regina. Thanks for it, Dave
Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 12:31 PM
...into dawn's delicious light....this is quite an emotional roller coaster ride from the depth of a dark sadness to an awakening to a new light.....magnificent!!!
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 1:43 PM
- Beautifully written with emotion, Gina ... (I had to read it twice ... I feel so sad in a peaceful way) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 8:10 PM
"Shadows arranged on the earth Birthing a feeling..." - The entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 5:11 PM
This winning piece has excellent lines, Regina. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.
Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:45 AM
congrats on y our winner. Sara
Volumes Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 3:43 AM
Beautiful visions eminate from your words Regina, its a lovely poem..
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