Shadows

They lurk about
Think no one sees
They stalk believing
No one knows
They’re there
Hushed implicit
In the night
Slithering about
Disguised
Concealed
Dodged
Eluded
Getting off
On being ignored
The dark shadows
Lurking in the night



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcferran Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 1:59 AM
This is fantastic... another FAV for me!! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 6:47 PM
The 'Shadow' knows--as do we now, Line, Aloha William
Gauthier Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Oops, I let the cat out of the bag.
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Oh, they do lurk. Great piece.
Gauthier Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 12:40 AM
And what is lurking in those lurking shadows!? :0
Gauthier Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 8:31 AM
If we knew, it wouldn't be scary...
Romios Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 9:38 PM
I think it's more than a good write! Shows thought. Not words slapped on paper. PANAGIOTA PS. iPad keeps printing my name in caps. sorry
Gauthier Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thanks for your visit, Panagiota. Much appreciated. (Technology is great when it works LOL)
Sergi Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 5:00 PM
I love this eerie theme . It is creakingly resonant. My compliments!
Gauthier Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph. Most appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Ah, cool! I like it! :))) xomo
Gauthier Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Rose  Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:04 PM
Its sounds all pretty creepy, I much prefer the light, nice one Line, Hope all is well, sending you a hug
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 11:12 PM
Me too, Pixie. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Good write,
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Eve, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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