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Shadows touch, casting a slight glimpse of doubt some say tears holding pain will bring despair and fear held within, a heart is without I say, simple joy is the way you care Comfort will stay, hope is everlasting there is peace in love, when moments are true found only in the tenderness you bring even when darkness wants to control you Some like to say that trials break down the weak, leaving them so helplessly unaware makes one stronger, words from the heart I speak humble in spirit, we have all been there Shadows will follow, depth will hold on tight calm remains, when love is a gentle light ------
~ Peace is found only in the Light ~ Author’s Note- Even though writing a Sonnet isn’t something my muse is familiar with. (It was nudged to create one) I am delighted this has happened.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2019 3:34:00 PM
Awesome poetry brandy, now take the next step and write one in iambic pentameter. You can do it!
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Date: 3/29/2019 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Son of Spock! I don't write Sonnets, but after writing this, I may have to try another one. In the future. I appreciate your thoughts and encouragement. :) Brandy
Date: 8/13/2018 8:20:00 PM
This is lovely, Brandy, with much truth and wisdom and emotion ... I enjoyed it thoroughly! I put off writing Sonnets for a long time, thinking I wouldn't like the form, then tried it and fell in love with the form ... they're still relatively new to me, but like you, I am thankful they have found me. Wonderful write! :-)
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Date: 8/13/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thank you Gregory. When my muse decides to write another Sonnet, I believe this one will always be my favorite, because of the truth and emotion. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/13/2018 7:56:00 PM
A supernova sonnet unleashed...the gods are smiling...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/13/2018 9:46:00 PM
The Gods are smiling!? Oh my, such an incredible thing to say!! Thank you Winged Warrior. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 8/13/2018 11:06:00 AM
Sonnets can be really difficult to write but you have done a really nice job in writing this poem, I absolutely love reading it,
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Date: 8/13/2018 6:29:00 PM
These words found me and when they did, they softly touched the page. Thank you Faraz for your lovely comment. It is appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/11/2018 5:04:00 PM
You say that you are not familiar with this style, but this sonnet speaks otherwise. A beautifully written piece, Brandy! Very well done...Charlie :)
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Date: 8/11/2018 7:59:00 PM
My muse isn't familiar with this form, meaning I don't write in this way. However, I can when my muse wants to. :) I do like form of poetry. You are so sweet. Thank you Charlie for being You!! ~ Brandy
Date: 8/10/2018 10:52:00 PM
The light how it shines here so clear and so concise. Irony? Perhaps, perhaps not. Either way a shadow is bound to us all. Beautifully written.
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Date: 8/10/2018 10:59:00 PM
Yes, I agree- Shadows are always surrounding us. Thank you David. Choosing to walk in the light, it is up to each individual. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/10/2018 12:33:00 AM
A further comment (reading this wonderful sonnet again): It is the depth of emotion and the elegance of your style which suits a sonnet brilliantly. I was sure of this from the time I started reading your poetry and this beautifully penned sonnet proved me right. I was a great joy to read this gem of a sonnet. T.J
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:41:00 PM
You place me higher than I deserve. Your kindness means so much. Thank you T.J. I appreciate all your wonderful thoughts about me and my poetry. I feel that my muse will try this again in the future. Once again, thank you for your support and for your lovely comment. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/10/2018 12:26:00 AM
I have been waiting to read a sonnet from you, Brandy. I am delighted to read this lovely sonnet and it was worth the wait. The beauty, elegance and soft touch of emotion is so vivid in your verse (as always). A fave for sure. T.J
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:36:00 PM
Dear T.J. Your thoughts truly humble me. I am aware that you have been waiting for a Sonnet from me. The words flowed so easily. I am pleased with the outcome myself, as it does hold so many emotions. I appreciate you placing this as one of your favorites. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/9/2018 11:16:00 PM
An artistry of words...it has a lovely flare...All the best Brandy
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 8/9/2018 1:41:00 PM
nice write...shadows are as beautiful in life as are the wind, rain, and sun.
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:46:00 PM
I agree about the sunlit shadows, and the moments they create. Simply beautiful. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Brandy
Date: 8/9/2018 12:59:00 PM
I love the thought that love overcomes the shadows of doubt and brings an everlasting peace, Brandy. A wonderfully written sonnet and on your first one, your muse did a fine job. John
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:43:00 PM
Awe, thank you John. Your kind words are appreciated. Light always scatters the darkness away. Always!! ~ Brandy