Shadow of the Crepuscular

Never alone in the middle of the night
(With me here for you feels like home)
Glare of a shadow in the absence of light
(By your side you’ll never be alone)

A faint distill in the air
(Smiling he falls down to one knee)
A hopeful turn and a distant stare
(Yes she replies with a tear full of glee)

(The miseries of marriage and the joys a new)
A roof over her head and a bed built for two
(Tiss a love story just begun)
And tiss a song and must be sung
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shango Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 8:47 AM
There is something very Gerard Manley Hopkins about this ... very captivating rhythm too. Welcome to poetry soup, it is a world of friends and poets, but it also a human world where we find support for human feelings ... I pray I may count on you for such a friendship. You have found your voice, I know, let it flow.
Palli Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Nice poem, thanks
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