Shadow of Clouds

The cloud is torn
Does it matter?
The sky is spacious
I will build a nest in the lap of clouds
We will float. Hands on hands, feet on mica
Your soft hands strengthen my power
Floating and swimming 
No one knows where we are
We sprinkle love from the sky
Teach them how to kiss even in a storm
When we are tired of roaming around on the earth
We will rest in our nest
The grace of your face
Suave bed of clouds
And your slow, enduring smile
Enlighten my hearts
If you also have the courage to love me
One day I will go beyond the universe with your embrace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/20/2013 5:51:00 PM
A very beautiful poem, Litan. This flows very effortlessly. Nicely done!...Thank you for taking the time to read my poems, and for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 9/8/2013 6:39:00 AM
Nice--you have a great imagination and ability to fly. You are not afraid of anything.
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Date: 8/13/2013 4:59:00 AM
Thank very much Anne for your comment.This will help me to go ahead....Good Luck!
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Date: 8/13/2013 2:40:00 AM
- A lovely poem Litan - I like it very much! - Love is so big! - All the best to you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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