Shadow Loss

I fled the fire, I ran for breath,
away from him, away from death.
I thought he was my only light,
but he was just a darker night.

I didn't know that you were there,
a hidden hope, a secret prayer.
But fear is cold and stress is loud,
it wrapped us in a heavy shroud.

The red arrived, the silence grew,
the moment that I finally knew.
The guilt is sharp, a jagged glass,
that cuts me as the seasons pass.

I kept the secret, locked and deep,
a promise that I had to keep.
For to reach out was to return,
back to where the embers burn.

I am fragile, I am small,
the one who stayed to watch it fall.
Forgive the girl oh Lord, who had to fly,
to save herself beneath that angry sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Legros Kelley Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 3:35 PM
My goodness, this is a masterpiece <3
Elias Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 1:14 PM
Hi there Bj It was a tough piece to write but loss is with all of us. May we try our best to see the Lord's hand guiding us along these treacherous paths. We are never alone!
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 7:07 PM
A beautiful somber write! Your rhymes are flawless!
Elias Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 3:26 AM
Thank you Karen. It is kind of you to say.
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