Shadow

I felt you avert your eyes cool as the shadow cast upon my face when a cloud crosses the sun Entered in You Broke My Heart contest 17 02 11

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 9:45:00 PM

Oh, yes! So short and shadowy sweet ... I LOVE this, Mo, and have to fav for sure! Gorgeous work, Dear friend - congrats! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/5/2018 7:34:00 PM

Well captured imagery. Congrats on your win, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/5/2018 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Line :) xomo

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/3/2018 7:06:00 PM

A broken heart so powerfully expressed in so few words, Maureen. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/3/2018 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Sandra :) xomo

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/2/2018 6:27:00 PM

I agree, brevity with a profound simile. Congratulations Maureen! Mick

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/3/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Mick :) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2018 5:19:00 PM

AMAZING> Brevity with a profound simile.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/3/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!

Fatima Ammar

Date: 2/12/2017 5:56:00 PM

Short and sweet. A delightful combination.

Kimberly Anne

Date: 2/11/2017 2:48:00 PM

and this is nice as well!