Shadow

My past sometimes ask me what would my mistakes been though I brought stars for her I defeated by her soft innocence She was the poision I was taking my lungs never complained this it was all her shadow that broke my heart into pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 1:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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February 21, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Vishal, I like this very much. LINDA
Lane Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:23 AM
Very sad yet beautiful.
Kumar Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:34 AM
thanx lin for reading my poem
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