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Shadow

My past sometimes ask me what would my mistakes been though I brought stars for her I defeated by her soft innocence She was the poision I was taking my lungs never complained this it was all her shadow that broke my heart into pieces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/29/2024 1:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:22:00 PM
Vishal, I like this very much. LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:23:00 AM
Very sad yet beautiful.
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Vishal Kumar
Date: 11/13/2015 11:34:00 AM
thanx lin for reading my poem

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