Shadow

my heart aches for you
trying to burst out
the more i think
the more my chest hurts
screaming your name inside
it fills with pain to cry

cant you hear me
as i step slowly behind
following, so i can realize
the mistake i have done to you
the harm that causes
you to become weak

to the point where your tears
are like rain drops slowly
it comes down
so much that it turns cold
i have made you into
another person

i'm sorry, i'm sorry
i want to wisper to you
over and over
i love you
to the point where
i want you to be with me
i love you
to the point where 
i want you to love me back

i cant help it if i wish to
stay asleep in my dream
where theres no demon
to break us apart

no stupid talk about us
all i want is for them to leave us alone
the pain screaming not at you
but at those idiots, thinking they know
when the story didnt even end

i'm going crazy isnt that enough
i'm standing here, not on my knees, not yet
but still beggin people to leave us alone
let us run the story
let us love each other like
how it was like how it should
let us, just let us, please?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/13/2010 10:44:00 AM
OMG THIS WRITE IS totally amazing !!!!!!! i loved soo much, ur such a good writer or perhaps poet
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