Shadow

rising with the sun shelter from the daytime heat eaten by the night

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/17/2022 9:46:00 PM

Beginning, purpose, and end: a well written Haiku, Warren, Thanks for sharing your description of a shadow with us. Great Haiku example, Bill ... a FAV

Warren Doll
Date: 1/21/2022 2:22:00 PM

Bill, thanks for your wonderful comments. I'm honored that you consider it a FAV~ Warren

Gary Radice

Date: 12/19/2021 2:30:00 PM

I love the personification in the last line. If this Haiku didn't have a title I could deduce it just from your clever wording. Cheers - Gary

Warren Doll
Date: 12/24/2021 4:45:00 PM

Gary, thanks so much for your positive comment and visit~ Warren

Deb M

Date: 12/8/2021 12:29:00 PM

Hi warren…..love this…especially like the last line!! Debx

Warren Doll
Date: 12/10/2021 7:43:00 PM

Hi Deb, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/30/2021 2:56:00 PM

Splendid haiku, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 12/1/2021 6:53:00 AM

Harry, great to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comment and visit~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/27/2021 5:20:00 AM

I love the last line Warren, " Eaten by the night" Shadows are our constant companions, indeed only the night offers them sleep! Happy Saturday1

Warren Doll
Date: 11/28/2021 12:44:00 PM

Mike, thanks for your visit. Always enjoy your comments. Happy Sunday to you~ Warren

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/24/2021 12:17:00 PM

Hello Warren doll, this is a lovely way to describe nature. Happy Thanksgiving Day. celebration. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/26/2021 2:45:00 PM

Hello Warren, no my friend. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you. Mime is in October. I already had it. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/25/2021 12:22:00 PM

Hi Darlene, thanks for your positive comment and visit. Happy Thanksgiving to you too~ Warren