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Shadow

rising with the sun
shelter from the daytime heat
eaten by the night

Copyright © Warren Doll | Year Posted 2021

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January 17, 2022 at 9:46 PM

Beginning, purpose, and end: a well written Haiku, Warren, Thanks for sharing your description of a shadow with us. Great Haiku example, Bill ... a FAV

January 21, 2022 at 2:22 PM

Bill, thanks for your wonderful comments. I'm honored that you consider it a FAV~ Warren

December 19, 2021 at 2:30 PM

I love the personification in the last line. If this Haiku didn't have a title I could deduce it just from your clever wording. Cheers - Gary

December 24, 2021 at 4:45 PM

Gary, thanks so much for your positive comment and visit~ Warren

December 8, 2021 at 12:29 PM

Hi warren…..love this…especially like the last line!! Debx

December 10, 2021 at 7:43 PM

Hi Deb, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren

November 30, 2021 at 2:56 PM

Splendid haiku, Warren.

December 1, 2021 at 6:53 AM

Harry, great to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comment and visit~ Warren

November 27, 2021 at 5:20 AM

I love the last line Warren, " Eaten by the night" Shadows are our constant companions, indeed only the night offers them sleep! Happy Saturday1

November 28, 2021 at 12:44 PM

Mike, thanks for your visit. Always enjoy your comments. Happy Sunday to you~ Warren

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 24, 2021 at 12:17 PM

Hello Warren doll, this is a lovely way to describe nature. Happy Thanksgiving Day. celebration. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 26, 2021 at 2:45 PM

Hello Warren, no my friend. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you. Mime is in October. I already had it. Enjoy your evening my friend.

November 25, 2021 at 12:22 PM

Hi Darlene, thanks for your positive comment and visit. Happy Thanksgiving to you too~ Warren

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