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Shadorma Life and Death

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*Image of Life Death Hourglass by Pixabay. Shadorma Life and Death Shadorma: Life A baby Their first baby steps They're walking They're talking Their graduation, marriage Start a family. *HMS: 3,5,3,3,7,5. Shadorma: Death Occasions Our lifetime partner Birth abides All our lives Shadows round-the-clock non-stop Until instructed. *HMS: 3,5,3,3,7,5. 2022 February 17 *1st Place* Give Me A Shadorma ~~Sotto Poet: Judged 2022 March 06

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2022 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations my friend, a very well deserved win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/7/2022 1:32:00 PM

Thanks aplenty, Eve, take care my friend, Aloha~William

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/7/2022 5:58:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: wisdom filled worthy of reflection. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/7/2022 7:16:00 AM

Beata, your visit and words blesses me in righteousness my friend, Aloha~William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/6/2022 9:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win William! There is a powerful depth in your images of the inclusive view of life. Stunning images, as always! Sending you blessings and prayers my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 9:50:00 AM

Deeply-felt appreciation, Sam, equally are your astute expressions and thoughtfulness my friend, Aloha~William

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/6/2022 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place win. Your Shadorma is stunning! :)Paulette

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 9:38:00 AM

A welcoming truly, Paulette, thought-filled shared my friend, Aloha~Wiliiam

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/6/2022 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win in my contest ( Give me a Shadorma). Your submission is stunning, William, I also loved your picture.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/6/2022 7:46:00 AM

I am grateful, Lasaad, and am glad to have participated in the first Shadorma poem I've ever written, 'twas fun my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2022 8:55:00 PM

so very true, William and I like the contrast you gave.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/17/2022 9:51:00 PM

As it is my way, whence I strut an unknown, I read up and it was your boy, Andrea, opening and the closure formatted apart--Fantastic (Nette too)! Obviously my first Shadorma, yours inspired Death, I added Life after much thought, for I believed that it should stand alone! Anywho, it is what it is--THANKS Andrea, Aloha~William!