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Shades of My Gloom

In vertigo of night, in their riddled trance 
Boldness of petals melt on washed-out shades,
As faces etch a quiet gloom in varied hues
Capturing splashed oil, neutral and bright
While I gaze longingly at a portrait…
Man and wife , as if  holding a child almost
Unseen …hidden through a float of blue-white.

Through dimming pain, a view lights up for a time
Where orange of moonlight quietly slips
Amid this rosette outburst and aching gray,
With blossoms strewn along pale candlelight…
How languid colors begin to mold my thoughts
Drowning in a pang of loneliness… I ask 
In silence..are the couple ,the babe dying?...dead?
And the fusion of tender, lonely motif allows me
To weep inside, captive in a gasping moan... the kind 
Which shapes a tone between life and elegy.



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Frank Herrera's  Contest: YOUR PERSONAL BEST of 2016
Written 5/09/2016        Re-submitted 10/18/2016
POTD Awardee
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Inspiration from the painting, Les Amoureux en Gris
Artist: Expressionist, Marc Chagall ( illustration included)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Richards Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 10:05 AM
An interesting, and mystical painting, becomes a intriguing poem. You have captured the questions and the life of both so beautifully ! Well done, Nette
Smith Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Vivid portrait Nette, Congratulations...
Chansarkar Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Just so lovely,thanks Nette!
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Nette, I thought I had commented on this when it was POTD, silly me, your interpretive write parallels the painting quite nicely capturing the feel and flow, and your words creatively mimic the tone.
Hamilton Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:46 AM
What an expressive and emotive write Nette just love the flow, "captive in a gasping moan" sounds like a real life experience coming through the interpretation. Congrats on POTD well deserved.
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Nette, nice win....LINDA
Flower Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Wow, congrats on the recognition as POTD, Nette. Well-written as always. Hugs.
Ashe Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:41 PM
First congrats on this POTD! I am familiar with this painting and you're in it, on it and about it!!! your words "ARE!" :-)
Haight Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Dear Nette, congratulations on your poem being honored Poem Of The Day! A very emotional write, and I feel how your words captured the puzzle in interpretation between life and elegy. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on POTD Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Horsman Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:00 PM
your poetry a photograph of the subject. a pleasure to read this, a prime example of your wonderful words.
Davey Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:43 PM
A startling take on the photo Nette! It is written with such depth that I feel that you may have endured something in close relation to your write in your past! Either way this is a beautiful piece of poetry and going on my favs list for sure! 7++
Dalei Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Nette, Congratulations for ur well deserving POTD. A nice poem, Enjoyed............//:) hugs
Roper Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the day!!! Great pen :-)
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 7:40 AM
- A beautiful poem is chosen as P.O.T.D. ! - Congratulations, Nette ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pennell  Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 6:55 AM
congrats and had a look on google images for the picture many thanks stephen today as been a good day for new learning !
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations Nette on POTD...
Inman Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:52 AM
A beautiful write full of emotion and very well thought out Nette.
Oyuka Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:30 AM
what a wonderful poem i really like it alot
Deschler Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:16 PM
A beautiful piece of poetic work written with a delicate hand... An exquisite poem, Nette. I liked this very much... Good luck in the contest!
Strand Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Like Chagall a class act,also like your ekphrasis Nette.Thanks for yr always welcome comments on my endeavours
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful interpretation of the image Nette - I have never seen this picture before it is hauntingly beautiful and open to so many forms of interpretation:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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