Shades of Exotic Dreams

amber ochers morphing
to brilliant tangerines
melding into the horizon

an undulating sea
fusing with the setting sun
unveiling hints of mysteries

beyond shades of exotic dreams
a sense of adventure
adrift on a lifeboat

carefree
faith in the universe
and all it has to offer



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Great poem. I enjoyed a great deal. It made my evening better. :)
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Lovely and enticing, Line. Sensorial and sensual. We need a contest to enter it in. Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Thanks for your encouragement, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Coulstock Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 8:39 AM
This is so soft and gentle Line I am carried along with your words.I especially love your last two lines. June.
Gauthier Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Thanks, Sylvia, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Singh Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Brilliant !
Gauthier Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much, Akham, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
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