Shades of Dust

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I shook my old mop through the air- dust flew, whirled about like small stars and moons circling planets like ours! Who's shaking their dust mop up there? September 1, 2021 Contest: Your Best Four-Line Light Verse, No. 2 Sponsor: L Milton Hankins ABBA Rhyme

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/24/2021 2:00:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 3:33:00 PM

I love that analogy. Way to go in the contest, Sandra

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/23/2021 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful and interesting Writing! Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:49:00 AM

Awesome thinking, Sandra:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/1/2021 3:19:00 PM

Ha, Sandra this reminds of when the lady on 3rd floor of the apartments we lived in shook her dust mop out the window and her dust particles covered our window sill on the ground floor. The hazards of apartment living.. Belle