Sandra Haight Poet Light Verse

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Shades of Dust

I shook my old mop through the air-

dust flew, whirled about like small stars

and moons circling planets like ours!

Who's shaking their dust mop up there?


September 1, 2021

Contest: Your Best Four-Line Light Verse, No. 2
Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Beata Agustin September 24, 2021 at 2:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2021 at 3:33 PM I love that analogy. Way to go in the contest, Sandra

Christuraj Alex September 23, 2021 at 9:54 AM Beautiful and interesting Writing! Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel September 2, 2021 at 1:49 AM Awesome thinking, Sandra:)

Beryl Edmonds September 1, 2021 at 3:19 PM Ha, Sandra this reminds of when the lady on 3rd floor of the apartments we lived in shook her dust mop out the window and her dust particles covered our window sill on the ground floor. The hazards of apartment living.. Belle