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Shades of Deja Vu

Intentions keep hitting a little bit different Encouraged by diversity in voices of interest Glances of colors in the language of poets Producing a symphony and didn’t quite know it Inspired dialogue of time, past and future At times serious or heard with humor A philosopher with a uniqueness expressed The gift of rhyme & rhythm so very blessed Illustrating feelings that once had existed Inventive style leaving one feeling twisted Embodied deep secrets all which are unknown Created intelligent reasoning design shown How the thundering echos eventually fade Yet remain, in written form verse now laid Speaking to me in shades of deja vu Stroking my attention, and imagination too

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Date: 11/30/2021 8:13:00 PM
Nice Brenda. Really dig the line "stroking my attention and imagination too".
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2021 10:49:00 PM
Ricky thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/10/2021 11:30:00 PM
This is very good...very good indeed, Brenda. Not only does it have that instantly recognisable B.C rapping flavour and intensity about it all...it also conveys an underlying sentiment...an experience we have all had...or will have at some point in our lives. Excellent piece of poetry! Lots of affection! :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/26/2021 6:35:00 PM
Lol thank you so much John! Chat soon I hope!?:)
Date: 10/10/2021 4:01:00 PM
Nice to tribute to the art of the bards, Brenda! Reflections of so many impressions. Sweet! :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/26/2021 6:34:00 PM
Ahh thanks Gershon!:)

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