Shades of Brown

The breeze a scent of salt and fish			
beneath a wash of puffy cloud--			
soft cotton hung upon a wish--			
the breeze a scent of salt and fish.			
The waves whispered in briny swish		
secrets to girls with heads unbowed;	
the breeze a scent of salt and fish			
beneath a wash of puffy cloud.		

The parasol shielded with red			
the words the waves from dreams recalled	
and hopes upon the sand were spread;	
the parasol shielded with red				
the happy thoughts on which they fed.
I strained to hear, my heart enthralled;		
the parasol shielded with red				
the words the waves from dreams recalled.

That day the sun in awe leaned down,		
captured the essence two hearts shared		
of planned bouquets and bridal gown.
That day the sun in awe leaned down		
and I who dream in shades of brown		
forgot I said I never cared,		
that day the sun in awe leaned down		
captured the essence two hearts shared.	

The grasses swayed beneath the sun;	
my heart was warmed in spite of him.	
I feel my joy newly begun,			
the grasses swayed beneath the sun.	
The threads of hope their words have spun	
have calmed me like a healing hymn;	
the grasses sway beneath the sun,			
my heart was warmed in spite of him.		

The breeze a scent of salt and fish,		
I turn my gaze again to sea	;		
red parasol shielding her wish--			
the breeze a scent of salt and fish.		
Hidden remains this heart anguish			
betrayal has bequeathed to me;	
the breeze a scent of salt and fish,		
I turn my gaze again to sea	.

Copyright, July 3, 2016
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Faye, congratulations on your nice placement in 'the red parasol' contest! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Faye, a beautiful poem and form...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Faye, congratulations on your win love the form! Hugs Eve
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Congrats Faye, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
DiMino Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Lovely poetry! Love the imagery very much.
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