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the best answer for the restless wriggle of day ennobled darkness my inner river in the darkness of the night goes away softly nanna's bees are thrilled they change hues to match her mood blond shows, she is thrilled grief taught me the truth the power to shine through the layers of darkness
Written: October 24, 2022

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Date: 10/26/2022 9:39:00 PM
"grief taught me the truth the power to shine through the layers of darkness"...... epigrammatic! In just three lines are enclosed a world of meaning ! Wonderful haiku series !
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Date: 10/25/2022 1:01:00 PM
A fave for me!! And that last line so true! Nicely done, Lasaad!
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Date: 10/25/2022 12:50:00 PM
... "grief taught me the truth"... it's often like that in life, Las - even in the dark you create hope through the joy of bees :) - hugs
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:28:00 AM
Haikus with blackness as a subject. Brilliant, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/25/2022 6:35:00 AM
Illuminating Haikus that dissipate darkness, my friend, Lasaad! Stay blessed!
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Date: 10/24/2022 10:42:00 PM
Darkness is beautifully portrayed in this stunning haiku series, Lasaad. The picture makes a fine companion. Blessings
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Date: 10/24/2022 3:57:00 PM
Uplifting sentiments you convey my friend: ---the power to shine through the layers of darkness...
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