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Vitriolic stances generate vicious marks. Sweltering, an irritating swamp of sadness. The bold spirit is infused with pitiful dark. Levied by cruel words exuding madness. Each genius suffers fools that ruin their harks. Parades of enormous egos in the sky. Thinking, they are clever in their eyes. If you follow the fool, you will run dry. This sense of pride links the beat to the rise. The patient’s head horn was extremely high. If you seek fame, they shun the white feathers. Going by water and fire pulls you near. Stiff work is vital for raising bright ethers. Each step takes us closer, great or mere. Bear you via a mirror and dispel your pressure.
Written: October 10, 2022

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Date: 10/12/2022 7:42:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/11/2022 7:58:00 AM
Glorious verses filled with beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! I loved it! Blessings!
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Date: 10/11/2022 12:55:00 AM
An intriguing write Lasaad, so well composed, your vocabulary is amazing. Just back from Italy, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 10/11/2022 6:58:00 AM
Thank you very much. Tom. I'm glad you're back home after your fantastic vacation to Italy, which you portrayed so beautifly in your poem. I hope everything is going well for you and your wonderful wife.

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