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You speak as if you've read all the pages. All knowing; bestow yourself this grace. Beneath that serenity lies an abandoned cage. Don't try to hide what's scrawled across your face. I've forsworn myself, now I'll tell the truth. The only reason for love in this world is you. Do you want to see my eyes shaded from the sun? Take this love and concern from deep inside me. Tear down these walls, show this damaged heart is done. Prove it's not "you and I" and no longer "we." A tomb is set in earth, shuddering beneath you. A souvenir of your self-inflicted ascension. Housing the victims you so lovingly slew, Demons overtaken; yearning for redemption. Please don't tell me it's wrong to keep holding on. Don't say those feelings were never worth the fight. Even when the pain is numbed and gone, I'll still need and bleed to feel your sunlight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/26/2016 10:37:00 PM
Sam, nice imagery, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:39:00 AM
Good morning Sam.
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:27:00 AM
WOW Sam this is such a beautiful poem, we all go through this, God knows how many times in a lifetime
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Date: 1/29/2014 11:09:00 AM
Sam Beloved, I am humbled by the mastery of your pen and the wonderful imagery of your words. I enjoyed this work very much...Thank you very much for sharing it. Friend, Robert
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Date: 1/28/2014 2:42:00 PM
:-) Thank you for taking me under this epic and awesome imagery. Sam, CONGRATULATIONS, for making the top, hottest, and the best NEW poets list on the Poetry Soup. You had the number one spot all week. I'm a little confused. When I marked you as a favorite poet, when you first join the soup, you weren't using the short name Sam. Anyways. I'm happy for you. ~ LOVE ~ SKAT
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Skat A
Date: 1/28/2014 8:15:00 PM
It's nice meeting you again, Sam, sending hugs..... Sidney LeeAnn M. (aka*SKAT)
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Skat A
Date: 1/28/2014 8:13:00 PM
I like going by my middle name LeeAnn :) But, here at the soup. I have to settle with SKAT...
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Skat A
Date: 1/28/2014 8:12:00 PM
My niece goes by SAM, it's short for Sandra Alicia M. Thank you for the little chat. I like Sam, it's nice and easy. I myself have so many nicknames. My sister's call me SID. My hubby and siblings call me Siddy, when good moods are around. My hubby & parents call me Sidney when demanding or mad.
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/28/2014 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Skat! You're correct. I wasn't. Haha I do prefer Sam though. I don't like readers to perceive me as a gender since it has nothing to do with the experience they have when reading my pieces. Androgyny is just a little easier. They can say 'he' or 'she' and at the end of the piece they're just taking away their own individual perception and not mine. Sorry for confusion! - Admirably yours, Sam.
Date: 1/25/2014 8:41:00 AM
There is great sensitivity and wanting in this piece.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2014 12:28:00 PM
My pleasure Sam.
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/27/2014 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Richard for taking the time, and care, to read my poems and recommend them to others. You're an inspiration just by being so kind and thoughtful.
Date: 1/25/2014 4:58:00 AM
a belated welcome to soup Sam I can see why Rick recommended reading your work I love this write Shadow x smile hug
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/27/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Shadow :)
Date: 1/24/2014 6:50:00 PM
Sam, I'm here by way of Richard. I just read all your posted poems, something I rarely do. You have great potential. I do see a common thread in most -your one-sided mental conversations with a woman. I liked several that approached regular meter and rhyme, a form you might want to consider. I liked this one and Societal Dream the best. I get the sense of a woman slightly older than you in several poems.
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Sam Beloved
Date: 1/27/2014 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Roy. You have perceived correctly. :)
Date: 1/24/2014 12:25:00 PM
Great poem Sam. I resonate with this..... Tim
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Date: 1/18/2014 7:47:00 AM
very heart felt..--LOVE and PAIN at once---..Sam..i dropped by to congratulate you for hitting the RANK 1 on Best NEw Poets..You are a great poet!!! ..i admire your work..:)) i wish you an awesome and happy weekend ;-)) ..no more tears for love.. *__*SMILE ^__^
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Date: 1/16/2014 2:03:00 PM
This is nice
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Date: 1/15/2014 3:47:00 PM
nicely done... rich image and drama i like it...
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:16:00 PM
Beautiful.. Well written. Keep on writing and well done for being among the top 100 most active poets.
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Date: 1/9/2014 11:21:00 PM
Love this. Not sure how old or new it is but it brings emotion.
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