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Sh up before dawn —
darkness permeates my bed
where I cannot sleep
inbreathe the static of night
change of time trammels my dreams

11/5/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/6/2018 10:18:00 AM
Yep, it does that alright. I love the way you paint a scene in so few words. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 11/5/2018 8:29:00 AM
It is always hard to get used to at first, but just as soon as we do, the clocks are moving forward again. Nicely done Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2018 8:52:00 AM
That makes two of us. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thanks, Chris! I was up at 4:30!
Date: 11/5/2018 7:30:00 AM
Stunning, dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks! I might catch up in Spring!

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