Sh Up

Sh up before dawn — darkness permeates my bed where I cannot sleep inbreathe the static of night change of time trammels my dreams 11/5/2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:18:00 AM

Yep, it does that alright. I love the way you paint a scene in so few words. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2018 1:39:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2018 8:29:00 AM

It is always hard to get used to at first, but just as soon as we do, the clocks are moving forward again. Nicely done Kim

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2018 8:52:00 AM

That makes two of us. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 8:30:00 AM

Thanks, Chris! I was up at 4:30!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/5/2018 7:30:00 AM

Stunning, dearest, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thanks! I might catch up in Spring!