Sh Up

Sh up before dawn —
darkness permeates my bed
where I cannot sleep
inbreathe the static of night
change of time trammels my dreams

11/5/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Yep, it does that alright. I love the way you paint a scene in so few words. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Green Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 8:29 AM
It is always hard to get used to at first, but just as soon as we do, the clocks are moving forward again. Nicely done Kim
Green Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 8:52 AM
That makes two of us. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Chris! I was up at 4:30!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Stunning, dearest, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thanks! I might catch up in Spring!
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