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Sexy Silence

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   'gainst mine bedroom
               paint
      Just as the sun's
              Beam
          hern naked
               she

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Joseph Spence Sr

December 10, 2020 at 10:24 AM

This is an excellent poem, my dear brother of God's inspirational grace, James. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message of "Sexy Silence." The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Nakedness" stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.

James Peranteau

March 5, 2022 at 11:17 AM

thank you for the critique dear poet...much love, james