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Sexy Silence

. 'gainst mine bedroom paint Just as the sun's Beam hern naked she

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Date: 12/10/2020 10:24:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, my dear brother of God's inspirational grace, James. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message of "Sexy Silence." The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Nakedness" stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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James Peranteau
Date: 3/5/2022 11:17:00 AM
thank you for the critique dear poet...much love, james
Date: 10/12/2020 8:54:00 AM
... oh... a hot one, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:43:00 PM
yes sexy one, James!!
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James Peranteau
Date: 10/12/2020 9:05:00 AM
Glad u like my dear poesy friend ;) much love, james
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