Sevenbits-Mask

Ornate guises fill the halls, Baroque, Venetian—timeworn In courtyards of seduction, A wealthy heir plays the game . Dainty farm lass in torn mask Becomes this man’s easy quest Her façade, a thieving ploy. Contest: SEVENBITS for nette onclaud 3 Oct 2017
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Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 8:35 PM
VERY cool way to do the theme of mask. I liked this a lot. Congrats for the win.
White Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Beautiful entry for the contest. Congratulations on your win :)
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:22 AM
Manny - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations on your win, Manny, wonderful. Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Manny, wonderful! CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:54 PM
hah!... this lothario was the one duped; very clever, lyrical write... congrats to the max and thanks for gracing this challenge, manny..huggs
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Very descriptive Manny I think nette will really like this theme:-) hugs jan xx
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