Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Sevenbits - Diary

My sister called and read me
mundane lines of teenage angst
which came from a diary.
I laughed and called it drivel.
Where did she find such a thing?
She then revealed she found it

in my old dresser drawer.

Oct. 3, 2017 for the 'SEVENBITS' Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Gregory Richard Barden October 8, 2017 at 3:24 AM What a lovely little surprise at the end - love this whimsical gem, Andrea - congrats on your win! :-) <3

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 8, 2017 at 2:05 AM Congratulations, Andrea for your win.

Eve Roper October 7, 2017 at 8:10 PM back to congratulate you on your win, Andrea, Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France October 7, 2017 at 4:52 PM Andrea, delightful, an awesome write and congratulations on your win!

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2017 at 4:21 PM i am like that too, andie, lol!...a charming poem worthy of a fine slot!.. congrats and thanks for supporting this contest...huggs

Joseph May October 7, 2017 at 7:25 AM lol...Nicely penned Andrea

James Inman October 7, 2017 at 12:07 AM Memories, Andrea. When I look back on my life it sometimes seems like a movie that someone else starred in.

Eve Roper October 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM Awesome :-)

Becca Teagan October 4, 2017 at 8:47 AM haha This is cool, Andrea :) It's funny when we look back at the things we felt were so important when we were teens lol Great job!

Russell Sivey October 4, 2017 at 7:50 AM Ha! What a brilliant twist you have within your glorious write my friend! Yes, you have a great twist within your poem, one that competes perfectly with other twists that are out there...yours might just win! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit October 4, 2017 at 6:18 AM A winning poem, Andrea--love every line--especially the last one makes the impact as intended!

Alexis Y. October 4, 2017 at 4:39 AM Hi Andrea, I liked how penned this write. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison October 4, 2017 at 4:06 AM ha ha ha I love that final line - I think many have chosen the diary theme... i did but I've never kept one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Supraja Kannan October 4, 2017 at 1:45 AM Great one Andrea... A fun write... LOved it... Reads like a winner...

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 4, 2017 at 1:43 AM A beautiful write, Andrea. A sure winner.

Frederic Parker October 3, 2017 at 10:19 PM thought about this contest then decided not to enter, good thing because you have a winner....I'd say good luck but that would be redundant