Sevenbits - Diary

Father’s diary antique
Daughter found and read entries
Unkind words he wrote for her.
Sad, she flung the diary 
Her pale photo fell on floor,
Written on it : words float on
My unsaid love for you deep. 

October 3, 2017.
Contest : SEVENBITS
Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 8:34 PM
I remember this one and I love it just as much on second viewing. CONGRATS on a really well deserved win.
White Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Achhh, what a sad but beutiful poem, congratulations on your win...
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:21 AM
Subimal - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:50 AM
Many thanks, Greg for your nice comments. As mentioned earlier I value your comments so much.
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, :'( so sad,,, that last line a killer... Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Thank you, Eve.
La France Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Subimal, so emotional, what an excellent writer you are, CONGRATULATIONS!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Thank you, BW.
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:50 PM
what a surprise; this was well done, subliminal... please accept my congrats and appreciation for entering my contest... huggs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Many thanks, Nette for appreciating and choosing the poem.
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 4:58 PM
This is a bittersweet one, Subimal. I also did Diary. just not posted it yet. Good luck in the contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:26 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I look forward to reading yours.
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