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Seven Years Questionku

 short seven years
romance; passion dies...
will the end be divorce?

seven ideas
love notes, kind words tried...
will flame be rekindled?

simple flicker
quickly fan small sparks...
a full blown love affair?

lifesenryu

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Sandra Haight

October 26, 2015 at 9:15 AM

Love the way your poem progresses from no hope to hope, Sara. Nicely done, and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Viv Wigley

October 26, 2015 at 12:49 AM

A great little piece, love it. Congrats, Sara! Viv x

Eve Roper

October 25, 2015 at 10:44 PM

:) Wonderful write and congratulations on your win and a 7!

Andrea Dietrich

October 25, 2015 at 5:08 PM

Love the way you played off seven year itch. it really is true!! Congrats for your fine win.

CayCay Godwin

October 25, 2015 at 3:03 PM

Congratulations, Sara. I hope all is well ... CayCay

Jan Allison

October 25, 2015 at 3:02 PM

Beautifully penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

October 25, 2015 at 2:37 PM

Well done Sara! I wrote a shape poem on similar lines of thought (Smoke). Congratulations ... a deserved top win! ~ Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

October 25, 2015 at 12:26 PM

I see you made some changes, congratulations on winning with these lovely Questionku.

Richard Lamoureux

October 20, 2015 at 9:37 AM

You have the spirit of the Questionku but are off on sylable count. 4 first line 5 second and six third line. You are correct to not capitalize the first word of each line. Thanks for visiting me this morning.