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Seven Years Questionku

 short seven years
romance; passion dies...
will the end be divorce?

seven ideas
love notes, kind words tried...
will flame be rekindled?

simple flicker
quickly fan small sparks...
a full blown love affair?   

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Sandra Haight Date: 10/26/2015 9:15:00 AM Love the way your poem progresses from no hope to hope, Sara. Nicely done, and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 10/26/2015 12:49:00 AM A great little piece, love it. Congrats, Sara! Viv x Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/25/2015 10:44:00 PM :) Wonderful write and congratulations on your win and a 7! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2015 5:08:00 PM Love the way you played off seven year itch. it really is true!! Congrats for your fine win. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/25/2015 3:03:00 PM Congratulations, Sara. I hope all is well ... CayCay Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 3:02:00 PM Beautifully penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/25/2015 2:37:00 PM Well done Sara! I wrote a shape poem on similar lines of thought (Smoke). Congratulations ... a deserved top win! ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2015 12:26:00 PM I see you made some changes, congratulations on winning with these lovely Questionku. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/20/2015 9:37:00 AM You have the spirit of the Questionku but are off on sylable count. 4 first line 5 second and six third line. You are correct to not capitalize the first word of each line. Thanks for visiting me this morning. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/19/2015 4:48:00 PM Oh these are good Sara, especially #3 Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/19/2015 5:40:00 PM Glad that you saw them as good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2015 2:52:00 PM - Great poem Sara - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/19/2015 5:39:00 PM Thanks for dropping by with well wishes for the contest..Sara