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Seven Slivers of Spring

hedgerows greenup- nature's pastiche awakens from winter sleep. Quiet greets the Spring morn, a shaft of light diffuses night snow melts slowly- a trickle,unseen,runs free begins a new spring # A babbling burn ,riverine unseen, a stream of freshwater silts sloping banks the current slows to- eddys, where fat chubb doze. Quiet greets the Spring morn, a shaft of light diffuses night into - a dawn chorus. Amid the eerie dayspring light yesterday's memories glow so bright # blossoms a welcome springtime emblem- the foretast of fruitage to come

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Date: 9/11/2017 11:46:00 AM
I really enjoy poetry like this and you seem to have mastered your technique. Well done x
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for your comments Thvia
Date: 9/9/2017 9:11:00 PM
Pleasing amount of lovely images and some great words too (pastiche)
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/10/2017 12:07:00 AM
Bless you Kim for your kind comments

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