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Seven Slivers of Spring

hedgerows greenup-
nature's pastiche
awakens from winter sleep.

Quiet greets the Spring morn,
a shaft of light diffuses night 

snow melts slowly-
a trickle,unseen,runs free 
begins a new spring
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A babbling burn ,riverine unseen,
a stream of freshwater  silts sloping banks
the current slows to- 
eddys, where fat chubb doze.

Quiet greets the Spring morn,
a shaft of light
diffuses night into -
a dawn chorus.

Amid the eerie dayspring light
yesterday's memories glow so bright
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blossoms a welcome
springtime emblem-
the foretast of fruitage
to come

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/11/2017 11:46:00 AM
I really enjoy poetry like this and you seem to have mastered your technique. Well done x
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for your comments Thvia
Date: 9/9/2017 9:11:00 PM
Pleasing amount of lovely images and some great words too (pastiche)
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/10/2017 12:07:00 AM
Bless you Kim for your kind comments

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