Seven Sins Sail

Scraps folded into motion

Paper boats entered the race

Vessels of courage and speed

Flowing reminders of hope

Bets were on white water claims

Most crashed down the waterfall

Mine docked upstream on the shore


15th May 2020

Contest: Finish Line in Seven

Sponsor: nette onclaud
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Mishra Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 11:23 PM
The spirit of faith that leads you safe till the end. Congratulations on your win Kai :) God bless you. Keep writing and inspiring.
Neumann Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Thank you Aditi, I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Lamoureux Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 9:21 AM
You made good use of your seven. I hope this sails to victory for you. Good luck in the contest.
Neumann Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Thank you Richard. Life is not a race ...
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