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Seven Merging Vows

Drifting across seven seas nascent hopes majestic lives, Undulating turquoise waves spill lilac pearls of twilight; Seven vows retreat to shore dissolve in our tides of love, like wet paper boats we merge. May 15, 2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE Q,any form,any theme contest Winner: 2nd Place

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John Watt
Date: 11/10/2020 6:08:00 PM
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This is just otherworldly in your imagery, Aditi, especially with the maritime metaphors, but I just love 'lilac pearls of twilight'. Beautiful poem ~ John
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2020 3:50:00 PM
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Hi Aditi...I was surprised not to see this beautiful entry on the winners' list! I liked your take on the 'Paper Boats' theme...quite creative. Regards // paul
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/20/2020 11:17:00 PM
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I am glad you liked my efforts. Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement Paul :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/15/2020 9:25:00 PM
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Incredible imagery. So well done!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 9:41:00 PM
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Appreciate your encouragement Andrea :) Much love.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 8:57:00 PM
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Lovely take on seven lines on paperboard. Best. Mohan
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 9:40:00 PM
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Thank you for your appreciation Mohan :)
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 5/15/2020 10:08:00 AM
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Nette is gonna love this, Aditi, this is very lovely with deep shades of meaning embedded in it:)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 11:22:00 AM
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Thank you for your understanding of my poem and your generous wishes Jo :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/15/2020 6:56:00 AM
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Another one of your talented writes, Aditi. ..turquoise waves.. spill lilac pearls of twilight..beautifully done.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 7:49:00 AM
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Thank you for the encouragement Vijay :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 4:52:00 AM
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Wow..I had a paper boat..But it sank in these poetic waves..Now shy to make one more..What a great entry in the contest!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/15/2020 5:01:00 AM
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Thank you Jeinsh :) Though I am sure your paper boat once poured in poetry will sail through great oceans so go ahead and let it sail.

Book: Shattered Sighs