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Seven Merging Vows

Drifting across seven seas nascent hopes majestic lives, Undulating turquoise waves spill lilac pearls of twilight; Seven vows retreat to shore dissolve in our tides of love, like wet paper boats we merge. May 15, 2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE Q,any form,any theme contest Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 5/20/2020 3:50:00 PM
Hi Aditi...I was surprised not to see this beautiful entry on the winners' list! I liked your take on the 'Paper Boats' theme...quite creative. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2020 11:17:00 PM
I am glad you liked my efforts. Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement Paul :)
Date: 5/16/2020 7:22:00 PM
A lovely interpretation of the theme, Aditi.
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:51:00 PM
Glad you loved it. Thank you for appreciating Beth :)
Date: 5/15/2020 9:25:00 PM
Incredible imagery. So well done!
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Date: 5/15/2020 9:41:00 PM
Appreciate your encouragement Andrea :) Much love.
Date: 5/15/2020 8:57:00 PM
Lovely take on seven lines on paperboard. Best. Mohan
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Date: 5/15/2020 9:40:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation Mohan :)
Date: 5/15/2020 1:45:00 PM
Intriguing poem, with plenty of images.
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Date: 5/15/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Victor :)
Date: 5/15/2020 10:08:00 AM
Nette is gonna love this, Aditi, this is very lovely with deep shades of meaning embedded in it:)
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you for your understanding of my poem and your generous wishes Jo :)
Date: 5/15/2020 6:56:00 AM
Another one of your talented writes, Aditi. ..turquoise waves.. spill lilac pearls of twilight..beautifully done.
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Date: 5/15/2020 7:49:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement Vijay :)
Date: 5/15/2020 4:52:00 AM
Wow..I had a paper boat..But it sank in these poetic waves..Now shy to make one more..What a great entry in the contest!
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Date: 5/15/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Jeinsh :) Though I am sure your paper boat once poured in poetry will sail through great oceans so go ahead and let it sail.