Aditi Mishra Poet Free verse

Seven Merging Vows

Drifting across seven seas
               nascent hopes majestic lives,
             Undulating turquoise waves
            spill lilac pearls of twilight;
          Seven vows retreat to shore
       dissolve in our tides of love,
    like wet paper boats we merge.


May 15, 2020
BRIAN'S CHOICE Q,any form,any theme contest
Winner: 2nd Place

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John Watt November 10, 2020 at 6:08 PM This is just otherworldly in your imagery, Aditi, especially with the maritime metaphors, but I just love 'lilac pearls of twilight'. Beautiful poem ~ John

Paul Callus May 20, 2020 at 3:50 PM Hi Aditi...I was surprised not to see this beautiful entry on the winners' list! I liked your take on the 'Paper Boats' theme...quite creative. Regards // paul Aditi Mishra May 20, 2020 at 11:17 PM I am glad you liked my efforts. Thank you for your appreciation and encouragement Paul :)

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2020 at 9:25 PM Incredible imagery. So well done! Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 9:41 PM Appreciate your encouragement Andrea :) Much love.

Mohan Chutani May 15, 2020 at 8:57 PM Lovely take on seven lines on paperboard. Best. Mohan Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 9:40 PM Thank you for your appreciation Mohan :)

Joanna Daniel May 15, 2020 at 10:08 AM Nette is gonna love this, Aditi, this is very lovely with deep shades of meaning embedded in it:) Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thank you for your understanding of my poem and your generous wishes Jo :)

Vijay Pandit May 15, 2020 at 6:56 AM Another one of your talented writes, Aditi. ..turquoise waves.. spill lilac pearls of twilight..beautifully done. Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 7:49 AM Thank you for the encouragement Vijay :)

Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 4:52 AM Wow..I had a paper boat..But it sank in these poetic waves..Now shy to make one more..What a great entry in the contest! Aditi Mishra May 15, 2020 at 5:01 AM Thank you Jeinsh :) Though I am sure your paper boat once poured in poetry will sail through great oceans so go ahead and let it sail.