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Seven Layer Cake

Seven- layer -cake
Fudge-chocolate on top, sides
Mother in kitchen

happinessintrospectionlifelovemotherhaiku

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Sharon Winter

January 28, 2010 at 5:21 PM

Oh YUM - look what I found! Dee-lish!! Just saying thanks for all your comments and so sorry I am not around much here at this time. Keep writing! Hugs, shar xoxo

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

January 25, 2010 at 2:54 PM

MMMM hungry.This reminds me of my mommy.Thanks for that kind comment.Teresa

Billy Thekidster

January 21, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Seven Layer Cake. Exceptional poetry. Why is it that I suddenly feel hungry? Great Write Sara. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 21, 2010 at 3:56 AM

ooh can I have an entire layer???? hehe I love cake not to mention chocolate! this is just yummy & I loved your last line, it just takes it home :)

James Fraser

January 20, 2010 at 11:39 AM

Yummy, yummy Sara >> James

Jared Pickett

January 18, 2010 at 10:06 AM

I have a sweet tooth.... Why are you doing this to me?.....:JP]

Brian Strand

January 18, 2010 at 8:17 AM

Will the cake survive long?Rgds Brian.re yr comment today...Just bacon in a different way.Sara

Marty Owens

January 17, 2010 at 10:03 PM

My kind of cake...Love your Haiku...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2010 at 7:30 PM

If for the contest great entry Sara.. mine is Precious as I think u read already.. so happy to say a quick hello.. off to trial this week and hope this will be the end of it.. but it has been an experience and I guess the Lord had His reasons for putting me on this one... talk soon... good luck if your entry... blessings.. with luv... Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse

January 17, 2010 at 4:59 PM

sounds delicious, is this suppose to be the noun haiku? I just wrote one and it is hard, i can't remember my adverbs and all. Check it out for me.

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2010 at 3:23 PM

May I have a piece, Sara?? I miss my Mama!! Great yummy Haiku LOL! Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem today! Have a very pleasant evening!