Seven For Chaos and Order-Rebirth

Tomorrow reveals a quiet world with words unspoken
From a tender love that was ravaged and lost
A heart once rich now poor and broken
By yesterday's betrayal and the amount it cost

Yet in coldest dark there's a flickering light
To shine and glow where your shadows form
Its splayed light rises and the heart is warm

1/28/17
contest Seven for Chaos and Order
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Way to go Frederic, congrats on top placement!
Warrior Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Congrats!!! Frederic...job well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Kimathi Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Congrats Frederic, for your well, deserved first placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Beautiful, Frederic. Such an emotional 'chaos and order' presentation. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Wonderful, Frederic. I hope it scored high.I am seeing congrats underneath here , so I am glad you made the winners' list!
Chaganti Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Hope is beautifully showcased in the verse.. well deserved win, Fredrick... Very many congrats...
Carmack Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Excellent flow and essence Frederic. Congrats.
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:26 AM
fascinatingly inked poem... the study of contrast between heartache and acceptance was tenderly implied.. many congrats on your top spot and thanks for joining, frederick...huggs
Parker Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Thank you dear poet for the placement an interesting contest
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