Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Seven For Chaos and Order- Jumbled Words

There's a turmoil of thoughts racing through my mind
 Letting loose havoc,  clarity is hard to find
 Thoughts colliding with each other, trying to be free
 What disarray exists when ideas are not allowed to be
 Suddenly the jumble of thoughts get organized right
 And order returns in harmony and delight
 So I calmly arrange them as I write
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 1/28/17
 Seven for Chaos and order contest of Nette Onclaud

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Winged Warrior February 2, 2017 at 2:31 PM Congrats!!! Joseph...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Sandra Haight February 1, 2017 at 7:05 PM Back again, Joseph, to congratulate you on your fine win! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi February 1, 2017 at 5:45 PM Greetings Joseph. Congrats for your WIN with this piece, filled with great imagery!!! ;-)

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2017 at 12:39 PM i like the way you depicted the mad rush of concepts within the mind and slowly arrange a theme in an orderly, lyrical manner... thanks for entering and sweet congrats for garnering a good spot, joseph..huggs Joseph May February 1, 2017 at 4:12 PM Thank you for my placement Nette...hugs..

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2017 at 7:49 PM very nice approach this was!! I like it a lot.

Sandra Haight January 29, 2017 at 7:43 PM Yes, Joseph, a perfect theme to contrast 'chaos' and 'order' as all we poets know! You have captured the frustration well! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Joanna Daniel January 29, 2017 at 4:50 AM I like this entry the best, Joseph:)every writer can relate to it :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 28, 2017 at 11:06 PM Calming the mind is difficult to do in this chaotic world we live in where everyone seems to be in a hurry and there isn't enough time in the day. I can relate. Walking where there are trees helps soothe my soul. I like the way your last two lines return to harmony. : ) 7

Alexis Y. January 28, 2017 at 4:05 PM Hi Joseph, This is so well written. It seems as though we went a simular theme. Sometimes it can be total chaos in the mind. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Jan Allison January 28, 2017 at 3:17 PM I know the feeling perfectly well Joseph!:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior January 28, 2017 at 1:18 PM I'm glad you cleared your mind lol...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^