Seven Days a Week

Monday starts it off
Tuesday will follow
Wednesday and Thursday
Friday will end it
Saturday weekend

Sunday Sabbath
seven day week
it goes by fast
each day special

time flies by
take it slow
day by day

one day
enough

life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dunn Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Not bad just needs a little more kick.
Heemstra Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 1:21 PM
Thanks Cherl I wasn't sure about the ending. I'm not sure if "Life" was a good enough kick for it. Thank you for your comment.
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