Seven Days

seven days a week... the intervals in between
can shape twilight into scented ambrosia
    and turn noontime to boiled potion of tan,
dusk smears the sky darkening bronze
        while an eve, a textured chameleon... 
  the shrill and serenity of minutes
can blaze the air with  time's ecstasy 
or numb the splintered liver of pain's regret. 

are these days that pour of subway’s sweat, 
then emboss  night with a vault 
of celibate, white stars? coffee and newspaper
expire as the hours dwindle into clockwork ticks.
and hands cradle an endless space
bathed in the moist kiss of dawnbreak
floating on a veil graced by 
             life's alchemy, unbidden...
 
seven days a week: a deep hole lost
in a melee between men and beasts,
defining not the terms and conditions
of human traces that linger or stain
the lines of meridians blending haste with
                            pace?
             there are no answers, 
i just wade like a child becoming a fetus
without all these adult specs rendering
white stars,celibate...
           in seven days a week.




Space and Time Contest
new poem
use of small caps is intentional
2/12/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on the win Nette,have a lovely Sunday.
A  Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Nette, a nice win...SKAt
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Nette I truly enjoyed "Seven Days". Fantastic poetry. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Richards Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 9:45 AM
It often seems as if week after week, we simply exist in that deep hole lost. It is up to us to step aside, and look, breathe in, live outside the frenzy...in a world such as this,, it can be a hard thing to do. A good reminder is your poem! Great introspection!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Nette this is seven days of splendor, congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 3:29 AM
Enjoyed the write on Space and Time . Congrats on the fine win, nette
Walker  Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 3:15 AM
Good work Nette... Enjoyed... Verlena
Bolton Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 8:50 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this, Nette. Your most interesting play on words kept me entranced. Thank you for entertaining me this morning with you wonderful poetry.
Kayode Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 6:42 PM
A poem that is a gift from above,definitely a heavenly dew, rejoice nette that the message is passed through you. Remain anointed angel of God.
Sivey Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 5:03 PM
This write is full of grandiose images, ones that seven days a week can emphasize completely! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, you have done masterfully with this incredible poem, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Very descriptive work..Seven days a week can become blended all into one rutt..Thanks for the visit to my page..We are expecting more icing this evening when the sun drops with it the thermometer..Sara
Datu Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Definitely filled with the many nuggets of moments in just a week. Great mystical images and the effect, softy dramatic.Thank you for an award in your contest, Nette.
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:31 PM
- May all seven days of the week be a party and enjoy ... (my day are: headache) - Must sign off the pc ..... can not bear to read more poems today ... : ( - Hope your day / evening will be fine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Em Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:25 PM
I was immersed in another realm, far from my own world, for a week that seemed like eternity.Overwhelming how you can expand boundaries of time with living metaphors!
Watson Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 12:56 PM
I loved this nette I'm celibate too . Thanks for sharing Daz
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