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Setting the Mood [ End Line Word]

Drakkar and Mulberry -------- Incense,
a fireplace setting, Sherry ---- and
conversation. I'm falling in ---- Love.
My heart is playing love  ---- Songs
as we embrace in this --------- Set.
I find this method to be -------- The
best way to set the ------------ Mood


Jared Pickett
2/9/2010
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 26, 2010 at 10:52 AM

Dear Jared, Fasinating How very Well Written This " End Line Word " POEM is You have Captured the Essence of The Form Thank-YOU For YOUR Support and Participation in Dane and My Endeavor to Create a New Form of POETRY Thank-YOU for Your Gracious Comments YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL ( In 5 Minutes )

Brian Strand

February 18, 2010 at 1:08 AM

Excellent JP thanks for your most welcome and valued comments today.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 13, 2010 at 12:03 PM

Jared, I HOPE YOU WILL ENTER THE CONTEST!!! (If you have not already entered.) Thank you for your support with this new form. I hope it was as much fun to write as it is to read. Smiles...Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens

February 11, 2010 at 4:13 PM

Wonderful end line poem....After Dane-Ann's blog I went back and capitalized all my end lines on my 3 poems....I guess for the contest they would have to be caps...Enjoyed...Marty

February 11, 2010 at 12:31 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of HG and Dane Ann's new form. It's quite the rave here at the Soup! Sounds like a romantic setting to me. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Can't wait to try out this form that you are promoting with your sweet poem, Jared! Luv, Andrea

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 10, 2010 at 6:28 AM

Dear Jared, The 'SWEETHEART" of POETRY SOUP "Linda-Marie told me YOU Wrote This " End Line Word " Form of POETRY Bravo my new found POETRY Friend A standing Ovation "Encore, Encore" Dane-Ann and I Thank-YOU for Participating in Establishing This New Form I have A list of POETS that have Written in this Form If YOU like I will Soup mail it to YOU I'm Pleased to meet YOU I will read YOU Time permitting YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 9, 2010 at 9:41 PM

Looks many are trying this new form of poetry and you've done well with it yourself. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 9, 2010 at 8:12 PM

Thankxxx for your poetic comments on my postings tonight.. just one glitch.. Ron is a married man.. is the picture becoming clearer??? while he's deciding what to do I am out having FUN.... he who hesitates is lost... remember?? luv.. "Sweetheart" hows the snow in your area??? talk about depressing .. I am sooooo ready for the beach....WHOA...

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

February 9, 2010 at 7:58 PM

Nice form. On the prowl! Great job and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 9, 2010 at 7:34 PM

And the Lone Wolf should know about that subject ... great job with the new form .. I am working on my fourth one to date.. its a fun form to experiment with.. luv your first line... right now I have strawberry passion and jasmine doing its slow burn.. luv luv.. luv.. "Sweetheart"