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" GOODNIGHT " MY PHOTO, ©

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the exhausted dim sun threw himself into night's arms -stars' twinkling glory © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 July 2020

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/9/2020 8:59:00 AM

If I was the sun I would set in night arms...Nice one

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2020 12:27:00 AM

Oh, Demetrios! You need to write more haiku! This is very special. I love "the exhausted dim sun." Thank you for sharing!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/8/2020 10:22:00 AM

My good friend, Sam. I am delighted to see you again my dear friend. Thank you very much for your beautiful comment. Blessings!

Michael Tor

Date: 7/7/2020 9:37:00 AM

Wonderful metaphors cleverly thought, especially "Stars twinkling glory" showing glory. A Haiku with much provoking thought Demetrios. Have a blessed day my friend...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2020 12:56:00 PM

Thank you for your gracious comment dearest, Michael. I appreciate your visits my good friend. God bless you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2020 6:51:00 AM

Beautiful capture of a scenic moment, my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2020 7:18:00 AM

This capture was the reason to attempt writing this Haiku, my friend, Vijay! Thank you for lovely visit. Blessings

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/7/2020 6:51:00 AM

A well deserved rest after giving us light and warmth. But it doesn't stop there if we look up we'll see the wonders of creation. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2020 7:16:00 AM

Oh, yes, our sun deserves to rest dearest, Tom. True creation is a miracle. Thank you so much!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/7/2020 3:51:00 AM

lovely Haiku Demetrios.. a short poetic beauty.. Have a great day..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2020 7:14:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Jenish. Very kind of you to visit and comment. Blessings