Setting Sun Vii

the exhausted dim sun 

threw himself into night's arms


-stars' twinkling glory 








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      07 July 2020

nightstarssunsethaiku

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Arturo Michael

July 9, 2020 at 8:59 AM

If I was the sun I would set in night arms...Nice one

Sam Kauffman

July 8, 2020 at 12:27 AM

Oh, Demetrios! You need to write more haiku! This is very special. I love "the exhausted dim sun." Thank you for sharing!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 8, 2020 at 10:22 AM

My good friend, Sam. I am delighted to see you again my dear friend. Thank you very much for your beautiful comment. Blessings!

Michael Tor

July 7, 2020 at 9:37 AM

Wonderful metaphors cleverly thought, especially "Stars twinkling glory" showing glory. A Haiku with much provoking thought Demetrios. Have a blessed day my friend...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 7, 2020 at 12:56 PM

Thank you for your gracious comment dearest, Michael. I appreciate your visits my good friend. God bless you!