Setting Sun

I race for summer's setting sun
as crimson bleed the alder leaves
in late September’s crisp blazon. 

I race for summer's setting sun
across the low unbroken run
past pyramids of flaxen sheaves.

I race for summer's setting sun
as crimson bleed the alder leaves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Adams Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 10:02 AM
A super triolet, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks, Cona.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 1:20 PM
A very pretty poem Dale I am not a particular fan of this form but this one is very beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Thanks, Jan!
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