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Setting Sail On Relation Ship

Though my landlubber legs quiver at the thought I wish to set sail on the wild winds of Relation Ship. This mime's gotta speak, this statue has to stretch. The Water of Life has yet to reach these dry cracked lips. This charade has to stop, life beckons at the top of everything I wrote about... it stands in wait for my flag. The storms are sure to come, along with boiling sun. It seems we're always playing that endless game of freeze tag. Frozen stiff waiting for someones touch to set you free from a most awkward position... to break the cycle of monotony. The wild winds of Relation Ship sure do beckon. They'll come whether or not I step aboard, I reckon. I wish to lay haggard in sweat and filth from the days crazy obstacles. To say, "I made it through". Tossing and turning on redwood planks, without fear of smirks and ridicule. To gaze at the vast array of stars with pure unadulterated delight. After a hard day of breaking ground with this Relation Ship I believe I earned the right to say, "Damn, what a sight!".

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Date: 10/23/2014 3:55:00 PM
this sailed very beautiful excellent pen dear friend
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/24/2014 10:44:00 AM
Hopefully to uncharted islands and new horizons! Thank you for taking a gander at my older work!
Date: 5/31/2013 12:12:00 PM
Ah, one day...it may come sooner than you think. I loved this poem! "Frozen stiff waiting for someones touch to set you free" That line totally got me. When you find the right person it can feel like the best thing ever. Free indeed to be who you are. Great!!!
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Caleah Buil
Date: 6/2/2013 3:24:00 PM
Sometimes it's nice to be single! Your sense is more around you. Lol!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/31/2013 11:23:00 PM
One day I will set sail... one day! In the meantime I'm not hating where I am. The solitude is nice and I still have some great friends... So happy you got something from this :)
Date: 5/27/2013 10:43:00 AM
To gaze at the vast array of stars with pure unadulterated delight beautiful lines a poem that makes you reflect Linda
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/27/2013 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Linda! It started with a love for wordplay, but then I started having a lot of fun with it... someday soon and it's "all aboard"... ha ha.
Date: 5/26/2013 12:34:00 PM
This is an awesome and masterful metaphorical write my friend! You have presented a tremendous poem for the ages, I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this afternoon! What a stupendous poem, Great Work!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:48:00 PM
I've heard the theme song, but not the actual show... I'm curious now!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:47:00 PM
Thanks Russell... far too kind!
Date: 5/26/2013 12:34:00 PM
"The love boat, promises something for every one, come aboard, we're expecting you. Set your course for adventure your mind on a new romance." some of the lines form the series Love Boat
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:49:00 PM
I've heard the theme song, but not the actual show... I'm curious now!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:49:00 PM
Whoops... that last comment was meant for Rick... my bad!
Date: 5/26/2013 11:21:00 AM
Step aboard the 'Love Boat', Tim, waste no time for those winds blow the days away quicker than you think. Take care, Richard
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:47:00 PM
I'll keep that in mind, my friend... someday!
Date: 5/26/2013 10:26:00 AM
Wow Tim....love this unique write of yours. I'm sure you will be untagged when you at least expect it, best wishes always. Hugs
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:46:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia!... I guess I won't know until it hits me...
Date: 5/26/2013 1:30:00 AM
I wish you smooth sailing, my dear! It is going to be a wild ride, and I do assume that once you set sail...we will see much less of you! ;) Nonetheless...I wish you well...you deserve the best!!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
Probably won't have much time for the Soup when that happens! Oh well... life is compromise :)
Date: 5/26/2013 12:45:00 AM
This is SO cool, Timothy!! What a great way to do analogy. And get a relation ship that employs "all hands on board" for handsies. heehee (soupmail)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
May the handsies jokes never end! Funny how this is all started with an off-the-wall pun that came to mind...

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