Setting Sail On Relation Ship

Though my landlubber legs quiver at the thought
I wish to set sail on the wild winds of Relation Ship.
This mime's gotta speak, this statue has to stretch.
The Water of Life has yet to reach these dry cracked lips.

This charade has to stop, life beckons at the top
of everything I wrote about... it stands in wait for my flag.
The storms are sure to come, along with boiling sun.
It seems we're always playing that endless game of freeze tag.

Frozen stiff waiting for someones touch to set you free
from a most awkward position... to break the cycle of monotony.
The wild winds of Relation Ship sure do beckon.
They'll come whether or not I step aboard, I reckon.

I wish to lay haggard in sweat and filth
from the days crazy obstacles. To say, "I made it through".
Tossing and turning on redwood planks,
without fear of smirks and ridicule.

To gaze at the vast array of stars 
with pure unadulterated delight.
After a hard day of breaking ground with this Relation Ship
I believe I earned the right to say,
"Damn, what a sight!".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 3:55 PM
this sailed very beautiful excellent pen dear friend
Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Hopefully to uncharted islands and new horizons! Thank you for taking a gander at my older work!
Buil Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Ah, one day...it may come sooner than you think. I loved this poem! "Frozen stiff waiting for someones touch to set you free" That line totally got me. When you find the right person it can feel like the best thing ever. Free indeed to be who you are. Great!!!
Buil Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Sometimes it's nice to be single! Your sense is more around you. Lol!
Hicks Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 11:23 PM
One day I will set sail... one day! In the meantime I'm not hating where I am. The solitude is nice and I still have some great friends... So happy you got something from this :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 10:43 AM
To gaze at the vast array of stars with pure unadulterated delight beautiful lines a poem that makes you reflect Linda
Hicks Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Thanks Linda! It started with a love for wordplay, but then I started having a lot of fun with it... someday soon and it's "all aboard"... ha ha.
Sivey Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:34 PM
This is an awesome and masterful metaphorical write my friend! You have presented a tremendous poem for the ages, I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this afternoon! What a stupendous poem, Great Work!!
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:48 PM
I've heard the theme song, but not the actual show... I'm curious now!
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:47 PM
Thanks Russell... far too kind!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:34 PM
"The love boat, promises something for every one, come aboard, we're expecting you. Set your course for adventure your mind on a new romance." some of the lines form the series Love Boat
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:49 PM
I've heard the theme song, but not the actual show... I'm curious now!
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:49 PM
Whoops... that last comment was meant for Rick... my bad!
Seal Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Step aboard the 'Love Boat', Tim, waste no time for those winds blow the days away quicker than you think. Take care, Richard
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:47 PM
I'll keep that in mind, my friend... someday!
Macfarlane Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Wow Tim....love this unique write of yours. I'm sure you will be untagged when you at least expect it, best wishes always. Hugs
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:46 PM
Thank you Cecilia!... I guess I won't know until it hits me...
Manassian Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 1:30 AM
I wish you smooth sailing, my dear! It is going to be a wild ride, and I do assume that once you set sail...we will see much less of you! ;) Nonetheless...I wish you well...you deserve the best!!!
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Probably won't have much time for the Soup when that happens! Oh well... life is compromise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:45 AM
This is SO cool, Timothy!! What a great way to do analogy. And get a relation ship that employs "all hands on board" for handsies. heehee (soupmail)
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 8:48 AM
May the handsies jokes never end! Funny how this is all started with an off-the-wall pun that came to mind...
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