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Setbacks

What  setbacks  greater  


     are,  in  a  married   life,  than


                  infidelity!




Date:10/07/16
Contest: Setbacks

abuseangerbetrayalchangegriefsenryu

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Daniel Turner

July 10, 2016 at 7:21 PM

This is really good Sunita. These short forms are extremely difficult for me but you have done very well. Good luck in contest!

Sunita U.D Palawon

July 11, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks lot Daniel, never mind it was not placed but was glad to have tried this form and that you have appreciated it! :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2016 at 5:24 PM

this is one of the best I have seen so far, it's closer to the true form of senryu (mine for this contest certainly was not!)

Sunita U.D Palawon

July 11, 2016 at 11:11 AM

Thanks Andrea, you like it. It was a first attempt, a motivation to write for contests here. Congrats my dear, yours was indeed good. I could not have ventured more than the 17 words, frankly! :D