Set Your Mind Free

If only a dream were the path to the future Where crickets and toadstools began the parade If storks in the sky were a common occurrence and lemonade grew in the cool summer shade If roads led to villages covered in daisies While rivers and streams glistened bright in the sun And heartache was more of a forgotten notion as each day appeared and was so much more fun Where chimneys all smoked but had no fear of cancer And skies were so blue you could paint with a brush And sea captains danced on a wave of approval While sailing so slow without even a rush Where moonbeams of sherbet made custard on Sundays and tables were set in the fanciest fare And doors were unlocked as the neighbors were knocking along with their dogs and a nice rocking chair If only a dream were the path to the future Our minds could control every place we did go It’s all up to you how this world comes to happen, just set your mind free of the worries that flow

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Date: 10/7/2021 7:39:00 AM
Hello Chris. As I am a believer of peace and being free in any form I turned the page to this entry. It is beautiful and your thoughts of a free mind is marvelous. May we all achieve this and remember how to achieve this as well. Have a beautiful day with inner peace and freedom. Yes, it is wonderful to see an entry by you once again. I will return soon.
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Date: 8/18/2021 4:19:00 AM
This is perfect for these times and can be helpful to anyone who reads it. Thanks for sharing. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 8/17/2021 4:19:00 PM
and lemonade grew in the cool summer shade/If roads led to villages covered in daisies…a couple lovely thoughts! <3
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Date: 8/17/2021 12:32:00 PM
i remember the days where we could leave our door unlocked and not have a worry or care, the country was safe. secure, now only a dream for most... but without dreams we no longer are living...i enjoyed this one my friend...i enjoy finding your poems every now and then :) hugs
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Date: 8/13/2021 6:59:00 AM
this set my mind free to visit your wonderful vision....and exhale a heap of tension....thanks Chris, nicely done.
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