Set Me Free

It seems I have lost my way, help!
Arrows, heartfelt
Pains, death-dealing!
Just my feeling.

My faith, I feel, has deceived me!
Gods false decree,
Religion kills!
No love, just chills!

Innocents die for what? Pure greed!
I pray, I plead
Please help me see,
Or set me free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 26, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Really freely written poem. Incredible work of poetry with great imagination. This poem has really touched me personally. Simple but elegant verse expressing poet's heart. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style.
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