Set Afloat Upon Waves of Air

Those days are gone, set
afloat upon waves of air-
that in which we dreamed, for we
were dreamers...adrift in the water
that took us to wherever
the currents flowed-
into weedy patches-
weedy and twining like our minds,
like ivy vines on cobblestone walls,
always reaching and climbing
further into the clouds, swirling like
the streams we floated down.
But our youth is lost, as are the 
summer days which grew cool,
stolen by the autumn breeze.
Oh,we still have those scenes,
leave-takings into yesteryear,
drifting along on those lazy, black tubes-
sunning upon the dam 'til
our skin baked a golden brown.
Those staticky transistors were never
fine-tuned, but the songs we knew
word for word, and the notes flew
high, swallowed by the blackbirds
gliding in the warm summer sky.
We walked a sash of dusty road,
with Duke dashing ahead, sniffing
grass and daffodils, on point for squirrels
and such, as he was the littoral keeper.
Now the pup has aged, and he hurts
as he circles his spot to lie, but nothing
has changed, really- except our bodies...
for our eyes still see ourselves as youth
reaching toward that summer sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/14/2016 1:49:00 PM
I have often felt the mind of my childhood still parading around within this aged head of mine...my body no longer able to join in. I enjoyed reading your words today, as always. J.
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Dana Young
Date: 4/14/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thanks so much J.
Date: 4/13/2016 7:51:00 PM
Very well done Dana. You have captured, with vivid imagery, the feelings of our own inevitability. Bravo...
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Dana Young
Date: 4/13/2016 8:51:00 PM
Oh Charlie...thanks so much.
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