Sestina

The lost little Angel was fell into the urban slums
Walking aimlessly with nothing but her broken wings
Blossom into granules of dusts, intangible as a vagabond

Her heaven plucked as the moonlight stolen, the intangible vagabond
Her sanctity made her glowed illuminate those souls who ingested by the slums
However flagellation in disguise filled the story of her wonderful flawed wings

Trace stitches by stitches of her wings
Her world plays deception in those eyes who marked her as a vagabond
In fact she just an imperfect little Angel and they are the slums

Rose from the slums, the wings tore the shield of a vagabond

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Introducing Tritina (a new poetry form for you!)
Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Dropping by to say hello. I hope you had a wonderful day Yanny.
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March 10, 2013 at 9:40 PM
HI YANNY, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
Williams Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:47 AM
yanny congrats on your win....David
Widjanarko Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Thank you David :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:28 AM
Yanny, your story in this poem is beautiful. I marked it down for the lines being overly long. Otherwise, it was wonderful. Congrats for the HM.
Widjanarko Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:45 AM
I just changed the ending, hopefully this is already correct, thank you for the input Andrea :D hug, yanny
Widjanarko Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Andrea, next time I will try to do better, thank you for your input, enjoyed to join in your challenging contest :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Good morning Yanny
Widjanarko Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 10:31 PM
Good morning Rick :D thank you for stopping by :D - hug, yanny
Breidenthal Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:41 PM
You've got a way with words! This piece was very captivating, and so interesting. I'm sure many of us can come up with different interpretations. Always, Laura
Widjanarko Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Laura :D your words really uplifting :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Hi Yanny, all done with my poem
Loving Iii Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:32 AM
Some are fallen angels this I do believe.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Thank you John, your words really uplifting :D glad to have a visit by you, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
A A Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Yanny, very well written poem. The words were arranged so beautifully.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Thank you Abigale, pleasure to have a visit by you :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Angels walk amongst us! You never know when you are entertaining an angel. Lovely poem Yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Yanny, I hope you had a lovely day.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Rick, what a lovely eye, deep like an ocean bluish like a sky :) wishing you a wonderful day Rick :) - hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 11:01 AM
The finest poem I've read here in a long Yanny, it is GORGEOUS! - Thank you dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Anne, this is my first attempt of this format, glad that you like it :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Ougo Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:03 AM
wow, wow, wow Yanny..you just made my day...i loove it:-)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Word Craft,your comment also made my day :) wishing you a great day :D - hug,yanny
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