Audrey Haick Poet Sestina

Sestina

Quite often it seems we tell kids, it’s best to be first
They sign up for fun; parents, it seems, for the fame
Whether it’s academics or sports, why not just let kids thrive?

Create environments for learning and fun needed to thrive
Nurture with affection and love; be their springboard first
Build the foundation they will need to handle future fame

A solid foundation will ensure an easy adjustment to fame
In any circumstance, self- assurance makes anyone thrive
Teach them, the game of life is not won by coming in first

Good character first, may lead to fame in which anyone can thrive
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Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 6:35 PM Congratulations Annalise...Donna

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2013 at 10:20 AM Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2013 at 9:33 PM ANNALISE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

Joseph May March 10, 2013 at 12:28 PM the race is not for the swift......congrats on a fine win Annalise

Carrie Richards March 10, 2013 at 10:16 AM Such good advice in this clever poem......I whole heartedly agree with every word. A poem for all parents! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 10, 2013 at 7:49 AM Congratulations Anne Lise, another one to chalk up luv , well done xx

David Williams March 10, 2013 at 7:30 AM Annalise congrats on your win, great sentiment in this one...David

Connie Gildersleeve March 10, 2013 at 6:53 AM Congrats Annalise on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 4:44 AM Congratulations on your Annalise!I loved it on my first read. Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 4:44 AM Congratulations on your WIN........

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2013 at 12:01 AM I love the message of this one and your love for children that was expressed. it was so nice, Annalise. Congrats in my contest.

Harry Horsman February 17, 2013 at 4:05 PM this is a poem close to my heart,, i've written many on this subject,, but not as pretty as this ..

Demetrios Trifiatis February 16, 2013 at 6:46 AM Words o wisdom spoken through the mouth of poetry! Well done!

Connie Gildersleeve February 15, 2013 at 12:50 PM A great massage for raising children. Nicely done Annalise. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst February 15, 2013 at 12:33 PM How true. I agree that character is necessary to handle fame. Perhaps becoming a person of character is more important than being well known or popular. I can tell you put some serious thought into this.

Toquyen Harrell February 15, 2013 at 7:24 AM Great one, Annalise! Good words for everyone. So love it. Have a great weekend! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2013 at 5:33 AM So true and well said Annalise.... Hope you had a romantic Valentine's day. - - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 14, 2013 at 8:23 PM very good advice Annalise....winning wishes

Tim Ryerson February 14, 2013 at 5:26 PM True words of wisdom, Annalise...Parents' so-called 'good intentions' often go awry and we seem to forget that a child just being and feeling loved is the key - Tim

Donna Jones February 14, 2013 at 4:42 PM Very well written with good message

David Williams February 14, 2013 at 4:39 PM Annalise excellent write and form...David

Jack Horne February 14, 2013 at 1:02 PM lovely write, my friend, and such truth

Len Gasun February 14, 2013 at 8:36 AM An excellent poem and form my dear friend, Annelise! I like it so much! Thank you for sharing and good luck always! Have a very Happy Valentines! love/hugs, Leonora

Kash Poet February 14, 2013 at 7:23 AM So True Annalise.Very good poem in this challenging form.Best wishes to you.