James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Serving Those Who Crave

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               Gifted souls with tender touch
                        and morning dew

           Slumped forward with pen and slip
              eager to share what God to us
                             did bless

                     Rhyming and flowing
                  serving those who crave
                    the passion and desire
                       of the poets mind

                      A sip of the goblet
                      and an extra word
                      to keep the hearts 
                         of the excited

                              in burn

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Daver Austin September 12, 2011 at 4:58 PM Yes, "a loaf of bread, cheese, jug of wine, and thee." Something like that. We could substitute pen and paper for the cheese, but never the wine. You do have the "tender touch. Love, daver

M.I.A . August 23, 2011 at 2:49 AM that 'morning dew' part is simply lovely. in burn James, always that, our soul ~.~

Elizabeth Wesley August 21, 2011 at 8:33 PM Hi dear James, I love picking the poet's minds on the site, we do have such fun! Your verse reminds me how lucky we are to have each other. Enjoyed!

Wilma Neels August 19, 2011 at 4:13 PM I just love how you come up with these gems James ;) lovely piece you have here.. Hope yourself and Noah will have a great weekend ;) love Wilma

Jack Ross Jr. August 18, 2011 at 9:04 PM Wonderful write mate, I love it....with love...old Jack

Poet Destroyer A August 18, 2011 at 1:32 AM I love it all james.. the rhyme flow... and all.. new is exciting ... take care..linda

Elizabeth Wesley August 17, 2011 at 9:52 PM Hi James, I'm back and sent you a soup mail.

Doris Culverhouse August 17, 2011 at 7:21 AM enjoyed reading your work today....thanks for your comments.

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2011 at 12:30 AM thanks for your lovely comments today, James. I will see if I can find an older poem of yours to read !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 16, 2011 at 6:47 PM well James so happy u enjoyed my Tyburn.. lately we poets have been learning lots of new forms.. hope all is well with u dear friend .. and Noah too.. need some luv lines to stir my juices luv..

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2011 at 7:35 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Truth is penned...Sara

Elizabeth Wesley August 12, 2011 at 5:06 PM Lovely James, a gentle verse that gives such a nice hug. Soup mail for you.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 12, 2011 at 4:50 PM James, this is great..luv the spirit and expression in all of your poems.... a true talent....thanks so much for your comments they are much appreciated....smiles....Chiquita B.

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2011 at 4:24 PM i must say, this is incredible, james!.. it has to have a part 2.. wow, the true spirit lives in you.. :) huggs, nette

James Foulk August 10, 2011 at 2:34 PM you are such a gifted poet, and this piece of wonderful poetry shows just that. thank you for commenting on A Dusty Road Have I Walked.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 10, 2011 at 1:53 AM Ah this is beautiful, and so true, James :) really enjoyed reading this :) thank you for all your kind words in mine :D

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2011 at 11:38 PM VERY nice, Mr. Poet!!! Great title for it.

Carolyn Devonshire August 9, 2011 at 10:02 PM Oh, I'd like to step inside your mind and see where your creativity originates, James. Perhaps I need a "sip of the goblet" to write like this! Excellent, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Jack Ross Jr. August 9, 2011 at 7:36 PM Awsome write mate I love it...with love old Jack

Doris Culverhouse August 9, 2011 at 6:49 PM Me like!! More more!! Thanks for your visits to my cyberwrites!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 9, 2011 at 3:20 PM constantly creative is the poets mantra James and the expressions of this piece radiate luv.. poetry is passion and desire ..and lots of emotion too.. an enjoyable delight my friend.. fresh view on writers from a superb writer..oh..