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Service,S'Il Vous Plait

a
trio
of garcon-
idling far too
long

http://www.worldofstock.com/closeups/TED1423.php  

"klenkes" (the little finger )is the identification sign of former people of Aix-en chapelle/Aachen

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Deirdre Omaidin

September 8, 2009 at 10:05 AM

Excusez moi Brian, meant to enter for your harvest competition but when I put it on the screen today I realised it's all over, will have to get my act together next time: Well done on this one. Regards: Déirdre

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 8, 2009 at 9:28 AM

Good Morning, Brian. I enjoyed my morning chuckle both before and after I looked up the word garçon. The sculpture was a perfect subject for this clever and humorous poem. I also liked the title, if you please. (Smiling) Thank you for choosing me as one of the top 10 in your Hymn of Harvest contest. (Soupmail) Sincerely, Dane Ann